tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8262240614560013924.post6537278087973354170..comments2023-09-02T07:32:27.591-07:00Comments on Writer's Washroom Annex: Heroes... Chapter Eight - "The Shining Way"Nickolashttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08187845898733828684noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8262240614560013924.post-26810811568154672282010-02-21T12:49:35.899-08:002010-02-21T12:49:35.899-08:00Thanks, Imagyst!
But tell: where are the errors?...Thanks, Imagyst!<br /><br />But tell: where are the errors? This is a WAY rough draft* and I'd love to find the clinkers in there. My brain has seen it so much it's just basically one lump of text to me anymore.<br /><br />And thank you for saying you like the multiple POVs - that's actually key to this chapter. I want readers to see that each Hero is a very different individual who sees things in vastly different ways.<br /><br />*Well, it's the first draft** of the second version (caused by the Vista crash of 2009) of a rewrite of the first Chapter 8 "The Shining Way" - which was written in about 2006.<br /><br />**The first draft as adjusted by constant editing, tweaking, and general anal-retentiveness.Nickolashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08187845898733828684noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8262240614560013924.post-42576606029976123992010-02-21T10:18:12.659-08:002010-02-21T10:18:12.659-08:00Couple errors, mostly spacing- one actual grammar....Couple errors, mostly spacing- one actual grammar... <br /><br /> Other than that, really pretty awesome. I liked reading from everyone's point of veiw- and the mustard jar was pretty funny. Look forward to more chapters!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com